Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Song start

So, I am writing a song, and this is my first line.

The everyone you are perfect,
But what do you expect?
I know that you cry, and that you lie
and I trusted you with everything


  1. great start!! just keep going...

  2. and i trusted you with everything...
    ...so here is the catch
    why are you here
    why cant you go,
    all your doing is making this harder...

    here is something!


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